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OneDragon

By OneDragon

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    Discord: Newtype #6223
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It’s when you take your character out of his or her game context...
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Inserting overpowering or unreasonable effects onto actions basically ensuring a result that cannot be challenged or built upon
    Status: Denied

OneDragon (also goes by OhnCharon, pronounces Ohn’Char-ohn) was raised in a middle class family with 2 older brother, 2 older sisters and 1 younger brother. Due to a reasonable age difference between the older siblings he spent most of his time with his closer younger brother as a child. During his later teenage years he developed a closer relationship with his older siblings. His father was nurturing but his mother was the caretaker and much closer to the daily affairs of the kids. 
after a lackluster teenage upbringing in a run of the mill town he pursued his college education in the regional state institute of large scale mechanics leading him to a career in infrastructure and factory development. Due to his propensity in tracking and hunting along with a reasonably strong intellect he was often asked to partake in exploration expeditions. 
OneDragon always had natural athletic abilities and practiced the local martial combat common amounts his village youth. During his adult life he took up the practice again only to find these skills in high demand as his life seems due for a major shake up... the world seems to be changing again and not for the better. 
Due to an early existential crisis (almost being killed due to unexplained illness) OneDragon sought the meditative tutelage of the village esoteric mystics and found himself engrossed in the, almost lost and forgotten, practices of an ancient culture. He pursues the truth, reaching out to the heavens to see if a god will finally reach back and reveal the true nature of all things. 

 

Character Name: OneDragon
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Height 180cm
Weight 80kg
Asian\European
natural proportions
Hair: wavy dark brown
Eyes: dark brown
Flexible sturdy legs for walking
Roleplay Scenario:

With an innate smile and engaged eye contact OneDragon answers, “I’m here to explore and seek new opportunities!  Maybe the local craftsmen are willing to take on a new apprentice?”

“might I also enquirer about the local etiquette in this fine gem of metropolitan might??”

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Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

 

You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

  • Your backstory requires at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support if uoi wish for so.

  • Though not an issue, you mention ‘infrastructure and factory development’ as a concept that your character has dabbled in; which albiet, can be interpreted in many ways. Our server here on LoTC is set in a tecklock resembling the technology back in 1200’s-1400’s. 

  • Your definition for Metagaming is incorrect and quite short. If you could, please change the definition to a correct one while also lengthening it. The best way to lengthen your definition is to provide examples! Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming if you need a reference; but be sure not to copy it word for word.

 

When you have made the changes, feel free to

 contact me through discord at @frog#0483 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

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would not know

 

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Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

→ Here are the changes you had to make.

 

  • Your backstory required at least one direct lore reference.

  • Your definition for Metagaming was incorrect and quite short.

You may reapply at any time.

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