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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is the use of out-of-game info to affect in-game decisions
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: a style of gaming which maximises progress towards a goal
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Thìndir
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 4 ft 9 in male wood elf, semi-attractive, wild black hair, skinny.
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Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

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Bad definitions

Your (roleplaying/metagaming/power-emoting) definition(s) are incorrect. Please correct them using the definitions that are on the LotC Wiki (the definitions will be located just to the right under 'New Player Information'.

 

Remember to write them out in your own words.

 

Expand on Biography

Please include more important events in your characters life which have molded them to be who they are today. (For this you will need the Wiki!)  Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age.

 

Explain your character in detail.

Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

 

Explain your flaws.

Why is your character bad with a blade but good with a sword? How'd they become strong? Why doesn't your character like violence?

 

Add at least two references to Server Lore.

You have one referencing Caras Eldar, but you should try and reference the culture of wood elves, or some major event in history. Check the wiki for that.

 

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial

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