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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Poe#4190
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is the act of a person to be watching a stream, spectating, etc and use this "information" to go find or torment someone or use this to their advantage.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the act of a person that may have an alt account and switch continuously to give an advantage to their self or others. Something that is unrealistic that a character isnt supposed to have an action towards.
    Status: Denied

I added this into my biography story, i hope thats okay. Feel free to please contact me before i get denied to add on if needed.
Discord Poe#4190

Character Name: Olaf Elonsson
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: hefty, but buff, Hazel eyes, brown hair, 222 pounds at a WHOPPING 6'3 height
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character caught cyan glowing ender clams after being in water with dangerous eels. This, as well as the nordicossey sea do not exist in the LotC lore, such as how your character's father passed to underwater enders- as well as many other inferences. It also states that your characters swam out of 30 meter dive with dangerous eels at twelve years old, which is counted as power-gaming. Please change this.
  • Your Character Biography is very lengthy and written in first person. Please change this for third person narrative and perhaps put them into seperate paragraphs.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario is not there! You said you included such in your bio, but there isn't. Please place the scenario in the correct position in third person.

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @latte#1608 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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latte

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

  • Failure to Make the necessary changes within the 24 hours. 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character caught cyan glowing ender clams after being in water with dangerous eels. This, as well as the nordicossey sea do not exist in the LotC lore, such as how your character's father passed to underwater enders- as well as many other inferences. It also states that your characters swam out of 30 meter dive with dangerous eels at twelve years old, which is counted as power-gaming. Please change this.
  • Your Character Biography is very lengthy and written in first person. Please change this for third person narrative and perhaps put them into seperate paragraphs.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario is not there! You said you included such in your bio, but there isn't. Please place the scenario in the correct position in third person.

 


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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