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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Poriis#6015
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Doing things that make no sence ones character doing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing own lore onto other people
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Character Name: Poriis
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 87
Physical Description: most time cleanly , redshot eyes and coal dark hair , strangely thin and lengthy still on the lighter side
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Gnomeh#8321]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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