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Rachel Raven

By Rachel Raven

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: roleplaying in and out of character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Going to the max to reach a goal for a game
    Status: Denied

Rachel was born Raihel Hunton. Her mother was a dark Elf and her father was human. She had 4 brothers. Ever since she was little she loved the idea of being a worrier, but her father always told her: "Men and warriors, women are servants!" When she was 15 she lost her manor in a fire. She only had one friend left in the world, A Dark elf thief, named Kadasha Clawfur. She became a common thief, but just a little over a year later, Kadasha left Raihel for dead. She managed to survive and started a nomadic life style, and started to fight for good not evil, and started going by Rachel Raven. So now she is on a mission to free enslaved and appressed citizens, of her world.

Character Name: Rachel Raven (Rachel)
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: green eyes, light brown hair, Caucasian skin, wear a green hood, black pants, fur-lined tan boots, brown gloves, and a bow and arrow pack
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Make sure that your Roleplay Scenario Response responds to the prompt given!

  • I recommend changing your character's race since a halfling is not a half elf, but equivalent to a hobbit instead! You would choose 'elf' or 'human' for your race, for clarification. For more information on Halflings, you can take a look at this wiki page here: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Halflings

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message teawithsarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at teawithsarah#0007

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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sarahbarah

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥

 


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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