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PrimarchPug
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Puglord#0346
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When someone uses out-of-character information for an in-character advantage
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When someone acts as if their action was an automatic success ignoring the other player
    Status: Denied

Gru-taf off the boat slowly, he waved back and forth sickly clutching his hand over his mouth doing all he could to suppress his feelings of nausea. Finally after managing to swallow it back down and muttering “Orcs weren’t mean’t for the sea.” He allowed himself to stare to the city before him, though it was dotted by bazaars and traders of all sorts it wasn’t that that caught his eyes. Instead it was the dark grey walls that towered over all else,  they were sturdy and easily capable of fending off smaller raiding parties, it put him at some level of ease.

 

He was caught off guard by the merchant, who clearly had used some strange vile magics to get the jump on the orc but nonetheless he’d let out a hardy laugh when the man approached. “I’ve come for work, tell all your adventurers that in a fortnite they will be out of a job and warn the lasses that I’ll come for them too. For I am Gru-taf, slayer of dragons and eater of witches, if you haven’t heard of me yet you shall soon. Now out of my way, I’ve heard this place has a strange fruit called “oranges” and I hope to partake.” He’d shove the man out of his way in his hopes to locate the citrus he actually had come to try. 
 


Character Name: Gru-taf
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 100
Physical Description: Gru-taf is usually seen wearing old rusted clan armor with his most noticeable features being his harsh red eyes and his two missing digits
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to various issues. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks does not include the required three traits. Please add some when making another application.
  • You are using the Skin of a character from Lord of the Rings. Please find a new skin via the internet (with the creator’s permission), or view our Skin Archive.
    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
  • Your Character Biography mentions the War of the Lofty Woods. As far as I have been able to find, this does not exist in our lore. If you believe this to be a mistake, please DM me the link to the article you found this reference in.
  • Your Character Biography mentions that your character’s tribe was wiped out and Gru-taf was ‘the sole survivor’. This is a common character troupe, and as such I advise you change this. If you need help or ideas, feel free to PM me.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario, while meeting the requirements, does not adequately portray how an orc would speak. Please have a look at the orc language Blah and PM me with any questions.
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Blah


After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.

 

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