Progressgamer7

Hello! I'm Keening and I'll be going over your application!
If you have any questions whilst you wait for me to finish, you're free to contact me here via the forums or by sending me a friend request over Discord; Keening#2991

Hey, Progressgamer7! Your application has been set to...

Your application is very well-done and I'm glad to see the effort you've put into it.
There are quite a few things that need a little bit of tweaking though, and then you'll be completely ready for being accepted to Lord of the Craft!
To start things off...

You seem to be lacking the Two Lore References that're required in your backstory.

• Lore references can include a nation or city name, a renowned event, mentioning a previous realm, any of our various races, and so on. The two you decide to include are ultimately up to you!
• Our Wiki is a great source for finding events, city names, nations, etc.

Your Backstory seems far too modern for Lord of the Craft’s present setting. Please modify it to be more rustic-themed.

• Including two lore references and detailing your character's life from birth until the present day would work best as well.

Your Character Description is lacking by just a smidgen; including various tidbits like hair color, eye color, their clothing, height, weight, and overall build would work splendidly!

• Remember, you should be able to visualize the character when you close your eyes. If you can't, I likely won't be able to either!

Your definitions for Metagaming and Powergaming appear to be wrong. Please rewrite them in your own words to be more detailed.

• The Wiki has a page on powergaming and metagaming that you can reference for help, just make sure you don't copy it word-for-word.

The Skin you've selected doesn't appear to suit the server's standards.

• If you need any help in finding a skin to use, you're free to review the server's Skin Archive and select a new one.

The Interesting Facts portion of your application is lacking a proper negative trait. Please change this to show one of your character's flaws before you continue!

• Having more than just one character flaw is fine, too.
• Being allergic to lamps seems like more of a joke as well, please change it to be solely flora or modify it to be something different altogether.

You cannot have any form of magic, regardless of how your backstory has been written. Please change this.

• Having knowledge of commonly-known magics is perfectly fine, however, knowing of the more niche deity magics or dark magics is against the rules.
• Despite knowing of said magics, you cannot claim to have practiced them or claim to be practicing them presently.
   

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. Once you've managed to accomplish this, comment here or contact me as soon as possible. If you have any questions about my requests, send me a message here on the forums or send Keening#2991 a friend-request via Discord and we can talk!

• If you log onto the server, you'll be able to message me as well by doing '/msg Keening' followed by your question or talking in the Wandering Soul channel.
• You do not have to make a new application to make these changes. Edit this one, please!

Failing to make these changes will result in an application denial, however, you can request additional time to work on the changes if you know you'll find yourself busy with something else.

If you'd like to see about getting help with anything else, related to your application or not, please join the New Player Discord!

To simplify the process of joining LotC's community, here's a link to our New Player Guide. It elaborates on everything you could ever need for writing an application, doing commands ingame, understanding the chat channels, etc.

I'm sorry to say, but the allotted 24-hours are up and your application has been...

Though, don't worry! You can reapply immediately; I only ask that you submit this current application with the changes I requested. It'll undergo another review, whether by myself or another Community Team member, and we'll see if anything else needs changing!

If you have any questions, don't hesitate in contacting me here on the forums or via Discord by sending a friend request; Keening#2991

If you'd like to see about getting help with rewriting your application, please join the New Player Discord!