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Prominus

By Prominus

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: Skybear1000#4778
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it is when you would wach there streem or something to hunt them down
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: pouting all you progres to one gole
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

I would say hi my name is josh what is yours.

 

Character Name: josh
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: vary skinny but smart and good with a bow
Screenshot of Skin:
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Please make sure to attach a proper skin file for your skin screenshot!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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