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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: python#8508
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you know something about the game irl, but ur character in game wouldnt have been able to know it
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when one person defines how the fight goes. eg. cutting off someone's arm rather than aiming at the other persons arm
    Status: Denied

(my character is a mute so dialogue doesn't apply here, sorry application person)

*silently points at feet with intent*

 

('I should find out if they are good feet')

*murmuring something that no one could hear less so comprehend*

 


Character Name: Tian Rui Jian
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6"5', lean. kinda not really handsome. white hair commonly wears traditional Chinese clothes. cold steely eyes.
Screenshot of Skin:



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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Skin is that of one of a nation's army, please make one that looks like your character.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [twisama#9232]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message TwiCringe to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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