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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is the process of an in-game character holding knowledge owned by the player, such as knowing future events or what other characters in other places are going to do.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the process of making an in-game character unreasonably powerful, comparable to that of a deity or demi-god in power level.
    Status: Denied

Olmomir departed the wooden vessel slowly, his silver-grey boots releasing a creak from the gangplank's wooden frame. He turned to face the ship that had carried him across the rugged seas before turning back to the bustling marketplace. He pulled his hat down and held it low by its foremost tip with his index finger and thumb, trying not to draw any attention to himself, and began to descend into the swarming population.

 

The constant jostling of people forced his body in all directions, before almost spewing him out of the clustered crowds and in front of a bazaar that was surrounded by providers and consumers alike.

 

He was approached by a well-dressed gentleman in a suit and tie, who spotted him emerging from the crowd. The gentlemen smiled at him and gestured to the bazaar behind him.

 

(Gentleman:) "Welcome!" he began, flinging his forearms to the side to emphasise his eccentricity.

 

(Gentleman:) He withdrew his armed and gazed at Olmomir intently, as if trying to psychoanalyse the young man. "What, might I ask, brings you to our glorious city this fine day?"

 

(Olmomir:) My face remained expressionless, eyes narrowing slightly as if I was in deep thought. I broke eye contact with the Gentleman and looked down, as if almost questioning myself. I was brought back into reality when the Gentleman let out a 'hmmm'.

 

(Gentleman:) He scratches his chin. "Adventure, perhaps? Maybe to expand your wealth? Or are you perhaps trying to elevate your status in society?"

 

(Olmomir:) I released a small murmur from my lips before properly responding to the man in a proper accent that he was not expecting from someone of my... character.

 

(Olmomir:) "My purpose here is none of your concern. I suggest you try and find somebody else to scam with those defective compasses." I responded dryly.

 

(Gentleman:) He takes a step back, releasing a small gasp as his expression turns from one of friendliness to one of shock. "W-What?! H-How did you know that?!"

 

(Olmomir:) I smirked slightly under my hat before responding. "Simple," I said. "When you flashed your arms out like a moron to try and entice me, I saw them dangling from your inner jacket. I saw the points on each compass fly every which-way as they moved, implying that they are attached by a pivot and bolt, rather than directed by magnets, which I assume you have removed and sold separately for extra profit. Am I wrong?"

 

(Gentleman:) The man was still in shock, his expression has since moulded to don a tint of confusion, with only one thing on his mind: "H-How did you do that?"

 

(Olmomir:) I simply chuckled at his foolishness before attempting to satisfy his inquiry. "I come from a background where your eyes have to see everything, even when it sometimes isn't there. Good luck!" I finished, strolling past him and leaving him to attempt to collect himself.

 

(Olmomir:) I smirked. 'This is going to be easier than I thought.'


Character Name: Olmomir Respicta
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Dark blue eyes, dark hair, 19th-Century British uniform (heirloom) covered by brown, torn trench coat (for cold). Moderately built, 6'1", 68kg, slim.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message CherryBud! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Cait#7292

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Cait#7292]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message CherryBud to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI


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