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Jackaline
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Its like cheating in a competitive gaming type deal. When
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When your focus on acquiring power during game progression.
    Status: Denied

Jackaline is a young mountain dwarf at the age of 18. She lived in a small cottage with her parents who she loved very much. She tends to want to please them and always feared the future but still stayed strong. She loves to build fortresses that peered down at the other worlds beneath it. When she would build and roam the mountains it always made her feel calm and happy inside as the cool breeze blew through her white locks. She loves the Nature and scenery around her. Hammers never did fit right in her hand and swords were much too heavy for her liking, so she always loved everything about an axe. It was convenient for travel, easy to use, and could be used for a variety of different things! She always enjoyed making new friends and always kept an open mind. She was Adventurous and kind to almost everyone she has ever met unless they had crossed her in some way. When she talked other people found it hard to understand her completely due to her Scottish like accent but that never bothered her. She was always loyal to her king and would do anything he commanded within reason of course. On her spare time she would create via sculptures now she wasn't the best of the best at it. She tend to make them rather small and simple. She always had a temper and would be rather rude at times but who could blame her no one is perfect. She's not too good at sneaking around because of her horrid clumsiness. She warships The Barthmordakin. Jackaline tend to take a moment of her day once or even twice to praise The Barthmordakin with all her might. Her ancestors lived alongside the Cavern Dwarves a lot more often than not because of their cities. Her door is always open to anyone seeking for hospitality. 


Character Name: Jackaline
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Soft, innocent, kind, Loyal, wise, sand hopeful
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Your application is very well written. I am pleased to see thought and effort put in behind your biography and your interesting facts. However, there are a few tweaks that need to be implemented before I can accept your application, those being as follows:

  1. Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect. You can find the proper definition on The LotC Wiki!
  2. Your power-gaming definition is incorrect. You can find the proper definition on The LotC Wiki!
  3. Your biography is missing the required lore reference. You can find that on The LotC Wiki!
  4. Your character description should be of your character’s appearance which should be reflected on your skin.
  5. Your interesting facts should include at least one strength and one weakness. 

Your application will be put on pending for the next 24 hours in order for you to submit tweaks. At the end of the 24 hours, if you have not submitted tweaks, your application will be moved to denied – but you will still be able to reapply immediately after! If you are in need of help, you are welcome to join the New Player Discord or join the server and talk to us in Wandering Soul chat. You can also submit an /atreq on the server itself and an AT will help you if you’re on the server itself. You are also more than welcome to speak to me on Discord in order to help with anything you need at all. My Discord tag is Sakura#8726.

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Hello! I’m afraid your application has been denied for the following reasons.

  1. Changes were not added within the allotted 24 hour period.

You are welcome to re-apply at your earliest convenience. The links below will help get you started on fixing your application for the reasons it was denied. I highly suggest utilizing them in order to help make your application acceptable and move forward on the server!

 

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