Ramiro999

Your application has been placed on:

-Dark dwarves come from the doomforge bloodline. You can find all of that lore here.

-You cannot mention that a magic has not been found yet. I would recommend either leaving magic out of your application, or reading up on it on our wiki which can be found here. Your character may not know any magic when you apply to the server.

-Your character description doesn't make much sense. It just says 'this guy...' Please create an actual character description.

-Your image, and skin, are not sufficient for a dark dwarf. They have dark skin and very red eyes.

-You will need a reason for the scars on your head. They cannot just have magically appeared there.

-Why did your father terrified of you? What made your character special?

-You mentioned your character has a hoodie. Hoodies do not exist in LOTC, they are much too modern.

-The current year on the server is 1659. Your character would not exist if he was born in 1990.

-Kal'Urguan is a city in Aegis, the first map on LOTC. Your character would be significantly older if he was born here (upwards of three hundred years old)! I would recommend checking out some cities in Atlas or Axios, as they are the most recent maps.

-Dwarves are generally strong. Why couldn't your character chop a tree at the age of eight, but others could?

-Your metagaming definition is not entirely correct. Although it is a correct example, please reword your definition to apply to a broader variety of metagaming.

You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

If you need help, feel free to join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

When finished making the above changes, either send me a message or comment on this application.

Best of luck.

Your application has been:

You failed to make the needed changes in the allotted amount of time. You will need to fix them for next time you apply.

You may reapply in 3 hours. 

I would recommend joining the new player discord if you need any help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw