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redcat13008

By redcat13008

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it is the use of information given outside your character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it si being able to carry out an unfair or godly action
    Status: Denied

her parents raised her with strict rules and deadlines. they where too overprotective and her whole life she was coddled. when she got to the age of 15 she ran away and the part of her that her parents warned her about, her chaotic nature, is not her drive . she breaks as many rules as possible and hates being told what to do.

Character Name: katarina
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: short, for a human, ruby red hair, purple eyes, fair skin
Roleplay Scenario:

I try to find a quieter place where I cannot be bothered. I steal some resources but only enough to keep me going. I respond by telling him its non of his business and to leave me alone.

Screenshot of Skin:
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Reginald11

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!wFwG-GQTXZTK6IhMDEWd9s4vMXyXReIzyfE62H0LKPpGVlqNmxmEB9OASkpQVPRplXMUkP3yno8NSQIK6K9R60qNxGvxBYrz-5McchUDYylg8oUYHeBlM_K6RUcX9OyzoGMIg7Ne

 

  • Your powergaming definition has a small grammatical error, please fix ‘si’ to is.

  • Your character cannot have purple eyes, as it is not a physical trait found within humans. Please refer to the wiki for more info [https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans#Physical_Attributes]

  • Your backstory must have at least two references to the lore, whether it be different cities or specific events that have taken place. For more info on these topics, search the wiki! [https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page]

  • Your backstory needs to be longer, five sentences minimum.

  • Your backstory needs to have less grammatical errors, such as proper spacing, capitalization, and punctuation.

  • Your roleplay response must be at least 4 sentences long, and include one action, and once piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Ttsim! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Tsim#1832

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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Reginald11

Changed Status to Denied

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • You failed to edit your application whatsoever during the 24 hour period.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below ❤️

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Tsim#1832]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Ttsim to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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