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Maxi-imus

By Maxi-imus

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: RedSstrider#8901
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: In role-playing games, metagaming is a term often used to describe players' use of assumed characteristics of the game.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is an sort gaming to get u to an specific goal
    Status: Denied

Maximus said annoyed :i have come here to search for a map the people in my land said it was somewhere nearby this place and thats why i am here

Character Name: Maximus
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 88
Physical Description: Brown eyes blue hair strong (with sixpack) 1,5 blocks tall 50 kg a scar on his left eye and white stripes on his normal skin
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.  It also says your character believes in Zeus, which doesn't exist in this world.
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#8455, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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