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RetaQueen

By RetaQueen

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: ratrat_insomnia
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Bob attempts to stab Fred with his sword, aiming for his upper torso towards his heart.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: player character would have an unfair advantage over others
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Freya Ember-Powler
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Height:5'7
Weight:61
heir:Deep purplish-black
eye:Sharp observant Gray
Outfit:Tightly fitted Dark leather and wool accented with smoky purple trim
Roleplay Scenario:

> Freya Ember-Prowler (24) is a Highlander defined by her independence and cunning. Her family were renowned scouts who lived on the periphery of the main Clans. Freya was deeply marked when her ancestral longhouse was consumed by a great fire several years ago—an event that destroyed her family and left her the only survivor. She did not survive by fighting the blaze but by outsmarting it, slipping away like a terrified fox, earning her the surname Ember-Prowler and a lasting distrust of large, vulnerable groups. She carries the shadow of that event, always moving with caution.
> She seeks to prove that cunning and agility are more valuable to Norland than brute strength. She has recently established a small shop in Varhelm, "The Prowler's Nook," which serves as a legitimate front for her true work: scouting and information-brokering. Her personal quest is to find a Shield-Wife—a strong, competent, female partner who she can truly trust to build a secure life with her, rather than a partner tied to traditional clan politics.
> Scenario Response:
> Freya's eyes narrow as she takes in the scene: swampy, dim town, ornate tent, candles suspended, and a hag who claims to have been expecting her. Her immediate instinct is distrust. She scans the area around the tent, looking for concealed exits or other watchers. She does not take the cushion, finding the gesture suspicious.
> "Expecting me, old woman? No. I am Freya Ember-Prowler, and I am not expected anywhere I haven't scouted myself," she states, her voice low and edged with Norlandic bluntness.
> She takes one slow, cautious step further into the tent, letting her hand rest lightly on the handle of the knife concealed beneath her tunic. She avoids the offered cushion, preferring to stand in the shadows near the entrance.
> "Speak plainly. You either seek to trade for information, or you are trying to trap a fool. I am neither. What business do you actually have with me?"

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TaraJess

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please rewrite using your own words, AI has been detected.
  • Avoiding Powergaming question: Please add an explanation on how to avoid powergaming, the example can remain so long as an explanation is added.
  • Please explain your character's backstory through roleplaying with the hag. Currently your backstory is being presented as out of character (OOC) knowledge.
  • Skin doesn't match physical description. (Elf ears)
    • Purple hair is not a natural human hair color
  • Please refrain from having your character have any present property, please also note that the city of Varhelm does not currently exist on the server.
    • She has recently established a small shop in Varhelm



 



 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @tarajessto let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub


 

 

 

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TaraJess

 

Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Please rewrite using your own words, AI has been detected.
  • Avoiding Powergaming question: Please add an explanation on how to avoid powergaming, the example can remain so long as an explanation is added.
  • Please explain your character's backstory through roleplaying with the hag. Currently your backstory is being presented as out of character (OOC) knowledge.
  • Skin doesn't match physical description. (Elf ears)
    • Purple hair is not a natural human hair color
  • Please refrain from having your character have any present property, please also note that the city of Varhelm does not currently exist on the server.
    • She has recently established a small shop in Varhelm

 

My discord is @tarajessif you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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