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Rippnugget
  • Rules: No
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: your character having the knowledge of something by your real person(yourself)
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Creating or enforcing a character that has godly and otherworldy characteristics.
    Status: Denied

Hello dear sir, what a beautiful day we are having, i am here on behalf of a long lost pal of mine whith whom ive shared many a beer and a good laugh, do you happen to know him he goes by the name of botisher?


Character Name: Bulthuc Varlad
Character Race: Cave Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Just an ordinary dwarf, long brown beard, wide body. brown leather clothing, blue eyes, brown hair, short stumpy body build, 4,8 height, 190 lbs
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

 

  • You must say 'yes' to reading over the server rules!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

  • Your Character's Likes Response states that your character likes that he came from Farshire. Farshire does not exist in LoTC lore so please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Likes should be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character came from a place called Farshire. This place does not exist in LoTC lore so please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! I recommend looking at this wiki page on your character's race for more information. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Cave_Dwarves

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character's race. Please amend this!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character was in 4th grade and was the tallest in his grade. This does not fit into LoTC lore, so please be sure to change this!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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