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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I would avoid power-gaming by treating my character as what its description states, For example I couldn't act as if I was some big looming figure as in reality my character is a tall skinny kid whose 25
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It could cause one individual to provide information to others were the first spreader or for example me shouldn't have known or spread
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Witt Knox
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: A young man standing at 6 feet 1 inch with a rather skinny build, 178 lbs. with ginger long hair and green eyes.
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
 

My story?      Well, when I was young I was a pretty big kid, as in fat... I was bullied and found that what stopped peoples voices from getting to me was music. So since then my main passion has been music. But as a Highlander we have lots of other things to worry about, I digress you asked about my story not the story of my people. Basically I lost lots of my weight over time with my funds being stretched so thin as all I do is travel. Not the best money making strategy. But now I'm happy with who I am and how I look, but the love of music I don't think will ever pass my mind. But I'm here looking too settle down I've been exploring and looking for a Woman and a spot for my own family I hope to create./

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

 

- Please put your roleplay sample in third person.

- Please provide some information about your backstory instead of not acknowledging it in the prompt.

 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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