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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The use of information not from your characters life in your own advantage.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Giving a chance to the other person to react on your reaction.
    Status: Denied

Bombur is a male dwarf that is 73 years old.

He lived with his 3 brothers and his parents in the Blue mountains.

He is pretty tall for a dwarf and is very repected by his friends and family.

 

First Bombur served a lord far away.

After a big battle with a lot of casualties, Bombur fled to Khaz'Ulrah.

He lost his family in this battle but he first wanted to be safe and would afterwarts search for them.

Once arrived, he got accepted immediately because they saw that he had a long history.

He settled in right after he fled and is a regular customer at the local bar.

In this bar they know him well and always  give him a hot chocolate, because he calms down from it.

 

Now he travels a lot and is still searching for his family.

He searched in his home and in the whole city but it was left.

The city was very important during this battle and was almost destroyed.

When he returned to Khaz'Ulrah he swore to find his family, even if it was the last thing he has done.

 

 

 

Character Name: Bombur Vlaming
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 73
Physical Description: If you see Bombur , you see a dwarf that looks very nice but he is not someone you want to mess with.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Sadly since this is a Guest Application I cannot give you the typical 24 hour period to make changes... As a result this application has been denied.

You can post another app 3 hours from my response here and I recommend signing up for a free forum account so that way if edits are needed you can do so.

 

- Your powergaming definition is actually the exact opposite of what we consider the term to mean. Feel free to glance over our Wiki page on the topic if you'd like.

 

- Typically we like to see more lore mentioned than just naming places. This could be bringing up specific battles (and who they were between), mentioning certain flora or creatures, religion, etc. Our lore is found on both the Wiki and the forums here.

 

- For the description usually we like to see more specific things like height, body type, hair, does he have any defining scars, etc.

 

Otherwise you did good! Just fix those few things on your next post and you should get in for sure. ^-^

If you have questions or would like assistance feel free to contact myself or any other Application Moderator. We also have a New Player Discord that's meant just for such things, where you can chat with approved helpers and other players about anything that might confuse or interest you.

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