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RoseOtania

By RoseOtania

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The use of information acquired out-of-character, in-character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Performing unrealistic physical or mental feats.
    Status: Denied

‘’The longing for adventure and knowledge brought me here’’ she answered smiling back at the gentleman.

Character Name: Rose Louise Otania
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Rose has Brow curly hair and brown eyes.
She isn't small but not really tall either.
She loves wearing dresses that show her body shape well.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming

  • Your backstory requires at least at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

  • Your physical traits needs to be rewritten. It must be 1-3 sentences complete sentences.

  • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits


When you have made the changes, feel free to leave a comment on this page, or contact me through discord at Language#1688. If you require further assistance, contact me or any community staff member found in our New Player Discord

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Liking or hating something isn’t a trait, it’s a preference. A trait is something like: Naive, Gullible, Clever, Clumsy.

 

Your backstory should also be written as a paragraph, not a bunch of separate lines. It needs to read like an American book.

 

Your definitions for Powergaming and Metagaming needs to be in your own words! If you just copy-and-paste from the wikia page, it is considered plagiarism and can be denied instantly.

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There were multiple reasons why your application was denied:

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect and also plagiarized. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming

  • Your backstory requires at least at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

  • Your physical traits needs to be rewritten. It must be 1-3 sentences complete sentences.

  • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits

You may reapply at any time, but please take the time to read.

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