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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Black-WeedSmoking-Snoop#0757
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using real-life knowledge in a role-playing game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: maximizing power and combat skills while neglecting other skills
    Status: Denied

Feeling skeptical I squint at the gentleman and pause for a moment...I then raise my hand and lay it on his shoulder. With a warm smile I say, "Well sir I was just passing through to find me a warm meal and a nice misses, but  an adventure strikes my interest. You have any to propose?" I maintain eye contact with man ensuring that he knows I am serious.


Character Name: Ajaar Loxindar
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Skin Color-Black, Eye Color-Brown, Body-Build- Athletic, Height-7'7, Weight- 260, Attire-Green Cloak with a hoodie
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Your Physical Description needs to go hand in hand with the server's lore for wood elves, I suggest you giving a second look at it.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be written in third person.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ JokerLow#6666]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message JokerLow to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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