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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When someone uses player knowledge as character knowledge.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When someone has too much power or forces a descision.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

Response: "I have come here to quench my ever present thirst for adventure!" Flash him a broad grin and continue onward.

Character Name: Tinnian Irwys
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Black hair, chocalate brown eyes, roughly 3'2"
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your wanted achievements must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Rin is Alive#0001 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message RinIsSalty to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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