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RyanStuff

By RyanStuff

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: RyanStuff#4305
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Playing from the players perspective as in. I wake up to a call from a friend to come online to explore.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Playing something unrealistic. Like a person at the age of 70 would battle after battle constanly winning running and running.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

Oh, hello! I came here for adventure I would like to explore all of this world!

Character Name: Ryan Kanuhame
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Ryan Kanuhame is an engineer who likes exploring. He wears goggles all the time and a green jacket with a white shirt.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action.

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

(Please DM me if you are still confused on capture roleplay so I can explain it to you!)


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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