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Stormx

By Stormx

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: electric sammy 4#9899
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: meta gaming is like roleplaying except for puttiing real-life knowledge into it
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: poker gaming is the aim of increasing progress to a goal when done to all other options such as storytelling etc this type of behavior is found in role-playing or tournament like games
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. I would respond with thank you for begging kind I seek adventure now I must go 

Character Name: Storm
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: My character has blue eyes he is still a kid so he is medium-sized he has white skin he is normal weight and he has blue and white hair
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

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  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • Your character’s likes do not have a reason. This should be at least two sentences long and explain why they like this about themself

  • Your character’s dislikes do not have a reason. This should be at least two sentences long and explain why they dislike like this about themself

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ HypedAngel#2020]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message HypedAngel to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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