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Sasori_Akatzuki

By Sasori_Akatzuki

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: Kimimaru#9804
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming in my own words: its metagaming when you have an information that you use that the ingamecharakter cant have.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unfair
    Status: Denied

I'm a traveler and search for a place where i can stay, what about you?

Character Name: Kimimaro
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: left eye blue right eye red, violett hair,2m height,slim,48 kilo, black clothes
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Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons.

 

  • Your Character Biography states that your character's mother was a witch. This isn't allowed, as you must learn magic IRP.

 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as dark elves have grey skin. Please fix this accordingly!
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  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.  https://app.grammarly.com/


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a forum PM, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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