Savagenesss

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

---

- Your Powergaming Definition is not quiiite what I’d be looking for, I’m afraid!! If you could edit and correct this, it would be much appreciated ❤️ Here is a link to the correct definition; just be sure to write it up in your own words, and not to plagiarise!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

- Your Bio is a tad short, and doesn't contain any lore references;; It also contains cliché – do try to avoid using this! Please do extend this to at least 10 sentences long, and be sure to include at least one lore reference (This could be a city name, important event, ic religious belief, etc) ❤️ In regards to the small village; I’d suggest perhaps making your backstory a little more unique, rather than simply being the only survivor when ‘orcs destroyed your village’. Might also wish to note this, quoted from the Wiki; ‘(the dwarves have) spawned a militaristic and entrepreneurial civilization that follows the morals of The Brathmordakin, the only recognised dwarven religion.’  ❤️ Here are some links to relevant Wiki pages, you may find these useful in searching for a lore reference to include!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Under-Realm_of_Urguan

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dwarves

- Your Personality Traits and Quirks section doesn’t seem to include a significant negative personality trait; please do include one! If you’re stuck for ideas, here’s a neat site that could give you some inspiration! ❤️

https://ideonomy.mit.edu/essays/traits.html

- Your Roleplay Scenario isn’t quite there,, – please edit this!! Remember to format it as an emote from your character’s point of view, such as the example given; with speech in speech marks (”) and actions outside of that! ❤️

(Example; “Out, out, get out of my house!” Charles barked, with a flustered and angered look. He jutted his arm out, with finger extended, to point at the rear door of his house. )

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

❤️

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the Pending message above! ❤️

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

❤️