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Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect. Please revise these and try to add some examples too. Refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  Your character does not fit into the world and lore of LotC. You must not reference out of character things (such as Hollywood) during roleplay on the server or in your application. Also, gnomes are currently not a race/creature on LotC.

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race/family or the name of one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use. As far as I am aware, the Hall of the Mountain Kings is not currently a place in the lore. If you think I’m mistaken, you can contact me.

Ø Your character’s interesting facts must be things that are roleplay friendly. Pvp and griefing are not concepts that are recognised in roleplay on LotC, however, fighting and raiding are. Try and change your character’s traits to be something that is interesting and unique to them.

Ø You must include a character flaw in your interesting facts. A flaw should be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour.

Ø  Your character description should be used to give a detailed description of the physical attributes of your character. This could include their hair colour, eye colour and notable features, such as scars or tattoos (if any). Please edit this.

Ø  Your character’s biography should not be written in the form of a story or diary entry. This field should be for including some brief information about the character, such as where they were born, any interesting events that happened to them in the past and perhaps a little about their personality.

Ø  While it is not necessary to change this, I wanted to make sure that you are aware that your character’s age means that they will be considered a child in most elven cultures. An elf is usually only considered an adult at the age of 50.

Ø  Your current biography does not make sense and is not believable. That many woman would not be standing around on the top of a mountain watching your naked character. This is also probably not relevant in an overview of your character’s life, so I would advise you to remove it.

Ø  Please try and correct your grammar across your application so that it is easier to read.

It appears that you have not read the rules before applying. Please read up on the rules and the application guidelines before you edit your application. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Application Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect. Please revise these and try to add some examples too. Refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  Your character does not fit into the world and lore of LotC. You must not reference out of character things (such as Hollywood) during roleplay on the server or in your application. Also, gnomes are currently not a race/creature on LotC.

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race/family or the name of one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use. As far as I am aware, the Hall of the Mountain Kings is not currently a place in the lore. If you think I’m mistaken, you can contact me.

Ø Your character’s interesting facts must be things that are roleplay friendly. Pvp and griefing are not concepts that are recognised in roleplay on LotC, however, fighting and raiding are. Try and change your character’s traits to be something that is interesting and unique to them.

Ø You must include a character flaw in your interesting facts. A flaw should be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour.

Ø  Your character description should be used to give a detailed description of the physical attributes of your character. This could include their hair colour, eye colour and notable features, such as scars or tattoos (if any). Please edit this.

Ø  Your character’s biography should not be written in the form of a story or diary entry. This field should be for including some brief information about the character, such as where they were born, any interesting events that happened to them in the past and perhaps a little about their personality.

Ø  While it is not necessary to change this, I wanted to make sure that you are aware that your character’s age means that they will be considered a child in most elven cultures. An elf is usually only considered an adult at the age of 50.

Ø  Your current biography does not make sense and is not believable. That many woman would not be standing around on the top of a mountain watching your naked character. This is also probably not relevant in an overview of your character’s life, so I would advise you to remove it.

Ø  Please try and correct your grammar across your application so that it is easier to read.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.