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scalysaly03
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Potoo#1011
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: just try to have fun and do not just make a real broken character. add flaws in to you character try to lose some of the time.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it provinces people from make a fun and compelling story.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example:

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until… 

"well I'm a halfling. I am from a small village far from here. I left to make money for I want to see what the world has to offer. not but 2 days in to my journeys I find this man called Akseli Halbred he was under a bridge it was poring down rain and he was hugger so I gave him food and a blanket. he then told me about his life and I felt poor in the hear I had had so much love and food when I was his age. so I set out to help him how ever I could so that he mite know what the love of a brother is like now where is he so we mite get back to our journeys." I said calmy to the women at the end of the tent as I slowly pull my knife from out of my bag. as I waited for an answer.


Character Name: Try Wood
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 4,11 is strong but likes a little fat long curly black hair skin is tan big feet and big hands a long nose, cut on his lip eyes are green and is 113Ib
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

Metagaming:

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. Be more descriptive with your answer so that I know that you know what Metagaming is. Explain it to me like I don't know what Metagaming is.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

Roleplay name:

Your Roleplay name has two surnames in it? Perhaps expand upon the first name a bit, add another syllable to Try. Like changing Alex to Alexander. Try Wood also sounds a little suggestive, which is why i'm asking you to change it.

 

Roleplay Scenario & Backstory:

Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states Akseli Halbred is in your backstory, are they a player on the server or an npc. If they are a player, please either provide a screenshot of the head of the family saying that you can join. Or please give us the contact information so we can double check!

 

You also marked down human in your character description but in your Roleplay Scenario and Backstory, you say that you are a halfling? Is your character lying? Does he believe he is a Halfling but is actually a human instead?

 

Skin:

Your Skin does not match your physical description. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! If not please take a look at our skin archive!

Your characters hair is half red, half brown. Not to mention his eyes are not green. These are all easy fixes and I'd be happy to help!

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is MrFunnyKeyboardGuyHaHa#1429! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @SomeKeyboardGuy!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

Metagaming:

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. Be more descriptive with your answer so that I know that you know what Metagaming is. Explain it to me like I don't know what Metagaming is.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

Roleplay name:

Your Roleplay name has two surnames in it? Perhaps expand upon the first name a bit, add another syllable to Try. Like changing Alex to Alexander. Try Wood also sounds a little suggestive, which is why i'm asking you to change it.

 

Roleplay Scenario & Backstory:

Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states Akseli Halbred is in your backstory, are they a player on the server or an npc. If they are a player, please either provide a screenshot of the head of the family saying that you can join. Or please give us the contact information so we can double check!

 

You also marked down human in your character description but in your Roleplay Scenario and Backstory, you say that you are a halfling? Is your character lying? Does he believe he is a Halfling but is actually a human instead?

 

Skin:

Your Skin does not match your physical description. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! If not please take a look at our skin archive!

Your characters hair is half red, half brown. Not to mention his eyes are not green. These are all easy fixes and I'd be happy to help!

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is MrFunnyKeyboardGuyHaHa#1429! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @SomeKeyboardGuy. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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