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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are too vague, please add some more detail to these. A good place to find this information is our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages (Just remember not to plagiarise)

Ø  Your character description has to be in full sentences, and has to be longer. You also need to include at least one lore reference from our wiki, which could be a city name, world event, religion, culture reference or similar from our LOTC lore.

Ø  Your character description needs to detail what your character physically looks like.

Ø  Your orc character cannot look like a human, that is not possible

Ø  Your character's name doesn't quite work, please change it.

Ø  Please put your three interesting facts into sentences, and remember to include at least one weakness within the three.

Ø  Be careful with making your character too OP. Saying that your character is 'Good with any weapon' is a little powergamey and OP. Take another look at this

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when reapplying. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!

You've made your biography longer, which is great! Please see the other points made above regarding your application ^ :)

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Ø  Your powergaming definition is still a little vague- please take another look at this :)

Ø  Please proof-read your application, there are a lot of easily fixed spelling and grammar issues.

Ø  Your skin is a little brightly coloured to fit the lore for orcs, please edit or change this

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Ø  Your powergaming definition is still a little vague- add some more detail please :)

Ø  Caring for others isn't really a weakness- please take another look at this.

Ø  Though this isn't a necessity, be careful with stereotypes in your character. It's much more fun to play a persona with a non-cliche history!

Your application has been

The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.

Please make the above changes before you do so