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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: meta gaming is using stuff in game your character would not know. saying some one name with out knowing it . seeing name tags.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: loss of fairness to other player. or your characters power/stength in fights
    Status: Denied

schorc believes he distant to be the best. try's his hardest in everything.  a very understanding orc. helps other orc with there needs. fights till the end. when he cant do some thing he try's and try's till he can do it. very smart

behind the story: he mother and father loved him vary much they believed in him but one day there village (Krugmar) got destroyed he lived woke up after 7 years but he did not die because of something in the elf's mind made him not kill him.  like a little birdy told him what to do go to warrior school for orcs when he woke up and went to it and he got some of the best grades. when he was 18 he joined the army. this is were the story begins


Character Name: schorc
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: one very nice orc. some 1 to get help from. one stong young orc.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are too vague, please add some more detail to these. A good place to find this information is our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages (Just remember not to plagiarise)

Ø  Your character description has to be in full sentences, and has to be longer. You also need to include at least one lore reference from our wiki, which could be a city name, world event, religion, culture reference or similar from our LOTC lore.

Ø  Your character description needs to detail what your character physically looks like.

Ø  Your orc character cannot look like a human, that is not possible

Ø  Your character's name doesn't quite work, please change it.

Ø  Please put your three interesting facts into sentences, and remember to include at least one weakness within the three.

Ø  Be careful with making your character too OP. Saying that your character is 'Good with any weapon' is a little powergamey and OP. Take another look at this

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when reapplying. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!


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Ø  Your powergaming definition is still a little vague- please take another look at this :)

Ø  Please proof-read your application, there are a lot of easily fixed spelling and grammar issues.

Ø  Your skin is a little brightly coloured to fit the lore for orcs, please edit or change this

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Ø  Your powergaming definition is still a little vague- add some more detail please :)

Ø  Caring for others isn't really a weakness- please take another look at this.

Ø  Though this isn't a necessity, be careful with stereotypes in your character. It's much more fun to play a persona with a non-cliche history!

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