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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: OnionChomper#1367
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: performing actions outside of your roleplayed characters' purview. Such as knowing information your character wouldn't logically know.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Rather than roleplaying a character with flaws, you're instead constantly the best at everything regardless of the rules of the world.
    Status: Denied

Kenneth respond through a fake but seemingly well meaning smile followed by "well at the moment a well-dressed and very WISE looking man to show me around?" the pitch of his voice raising to a question as he tries awakwardly his luck at charisma.

Character Name: Kenneth Cobblestone
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Rather skinny with dark skin, brown eyes with large pupil glazed in a miasma of experience, hair long and unkemp rather tall awkward proportions.
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  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response was too short! It must be in third person and at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

  • Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with their biography!


 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Mingo#2467 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Your application has been denied at this time as no edits were made in the allotted time. Feel free to apply again at any point! If you have any questions regarding this decision, message me through the forums or Discord @ Mingo#2467 

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