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SeJTaN13
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Its using informations from real world and applying them to ingame world and cooping with other players using this informations. If I have any knowledge, i can apply them to the game and base on it.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Its doing unrealistic things in ingame world, rushing progress, and it is negative, when I dont care about history, atmosphere and kindness.
    Status: Denied

Born as a child of elf mother known as a local farmer and a local bard, that was also not such a good man in Orenian Empire. During this hard childhood he was just a lonely, unwanted kidd. He had to work early, steal food, and fight for his life everyday. One day, during his job in a local grocery, he was cought trying to steal some food. He went to court which expelled him from the village. His parents behaved then like they never met him, that made him distressed. He stoped trusting people for the rest of his life. After spending a few years traveling through the forests he used to learn how to survive and fight with monsters from the darkwoods. He sometimes visits cities to take some orders or sell some goods obtained in forests or stolen from pirates and cutthroats. Most of his life he spent during traveling across the lands.


Character Name: Marius The Lander
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 36
Physical Description: This man looks just like a human monster. He is high, muscled, and have a lot of scars on his body. His eyes seems to be dark, but are blue.
Roleplay Scenario:

"I am looking all the time for some adventures. I think, its time to drink something i tavern!" Marius with a fire in eyes replied fast. "I have some stories to tell, some jobs to take! Can u show me a way?" The man looked closely at the traveler with interest, smilled, and shown the way to the tavern. Marius confidently went in the direction indicated, saing quiet to himself: "There is a lot of monsters still alive. I have to take them all".

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Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reasons listed below. Please read through them, and make the appropriate changes before applying again.

 

 

Definitions: Your definitions are both too limited in detail. Please go more in-depth with them. If unsure, search up online for some examples and definitions, but make sure to re-write them with your own words.

 

 

Backstory: Please elaborate on your backstory - why did he end up killing BOTH his parents? How did it actually affect him? Try your best to fix your grammatical errors as well, please.

 

Physical Description: Needs some work - elaborate more on what your character looks like, any significant things that make him stand out. 

 

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs serious work as well. Treat it like a normal roleplay interaction, and keep it simple if you find it difficult. It's just a way for us to determine your roleplay quality, and make sure it meets our server's standards. In your next roleplay scenario, please include the following:

 

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

 

 

Feel free to re-apply at any time after this denial, just make sure you make the changes with the aforementioned things. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2021.

 

Best of luck, I hope to see you on the server soon.

 

 

 

 

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