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SeJTaN13

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Its using informations from real world and applying them to ingame world and cooping with other players using this informations. If I have any knowledge, i can apply them to the game and base on it.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Its doing unrealistic things in ingame world, rushing progress, and it is negative, when I dont care about history, atmosphere and kindness.
    Status: Denied

"I am looking all the time for some adventures. I think, its time to drink something i tavern!" Marius with a fire in eyes replied fast. "I have some stories to tell, some jobs to take! Can u show me a way?" The man looked closely at the traveler with interest, smilled, and shown the way to the tavern. Marius confidently went in the direction indicated, saing quiet to himself: "There is a lot of monsters still alive. I have to take them all".

Character Name: Marius The Lander
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 36
Physical Description: This man looks just like a human monster. He is high, muscled, and have a lot of scars on his body. His eyes seems to be dark, but are blue.
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Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reasons listed below. Please read through them, and make the appropriate changes before applying again.

 

 

Definitions: Your definitions are both too limited in detail. Please go more in-depth with them. If unsure, search up online for some examples and definitions, but make sure to re-write them with your own words.

 

 

Backstory: Please elaborate on your backstory - why did he end up killing BOTH his parents? How did it actually affect him? Try your best to fix your grammatical errors as well, please.

 

Physical Description: Needs some work - elaborate more on what your character looks like, any significant things that make him stand out. 

 

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs serious work as well. Treat it like a normal roleplay interaction, and keep it simple if you find it difficult. It's just a way for us to determine your roleplay quality, and make sure it meets our server's standards. In your next roleplay scenario, please include the following:

 

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

 

 

Feel free to re-apply at any time after this denial, just make sure you make the changes with the aforementioned things. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2021.

 

Best of luck, I hope to see you on the server soon.

 

 

 

 

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