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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I'd avoid it by keeping my character down to earth and have realistic trains like your average person in the roleplay and to give him obstacles for him to grow as a person instead of him starting off as a perfect human being
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disputes fair roleplay as its using information you might have gained out side of the roleplay and then you use it to prevent something or an event, which isn't fair at all because it ruins the roleplay and the environment of the event and server
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Cassian
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: He is 6 foot 1, and weighs 190lbs and has brown hair. He has Black eyes. He wears armour as his main atire
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

The human Cassian would be on horse back as he enters the dingy small town in the distasteful swamp. There he would eventually meet an old hag who would be curious on why he picked this town out of all the surrounding towns. One of her questions would be "How did you end up here?" Cassian responds, "I'm a lord less Knight looking for some work and possible a new lord" The old hag would look him and his dirtied armor covered with scratches and dents and an unfamiliar crest engraved into the armor. She then would ask him "What does that crest represent?" and Cassian would pause and have great sorrow in his eyes before saying "from lands far from this one, now destroyed by constant war". She would notice the pain in Cassian's eyes, eyes that saw terrible things. "It seems like you've experience many hardships to get were you are now." She said with sorrow in her eyes. "Yes... I've done stuff I stood against, horrible things I did in battle" He said, "The lives I've taken still waive heavy on me til this day." She gives him a hug, and then points him over to the inn where he can stay the night. As he leaves she says "I hope you find what your looking for here" before walking away into the night.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No two colour eyes.

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

-Your Physical Description and skin  doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No black eyes.

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 

-Your Physical Description and skin  doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No black eyes.

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord


If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

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