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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is like when your own character is roleplayed so they would know something they have not been told or figured out, or using so called "out of character" knowledge
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is like forcing another player's character to do something that they could not have a say in or prevent
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Cosmo was born with his two alchemist parents in a small town, his parents loved him and they usually let him try a bunch of potions they had, on one faithful day, his father was on a trip out of town, and his mother was making a dangerous drink, though... it looked like mere strawberry juice, and as Cosmo drank it, a curse flowed into his body, his mother wasnt looking, and his usually light purple eyes, started changing colour, into crimson, and he started going insane, the now 8 year old Cosmo had a cursed soul travel into his body to live with his normal soul for the rest of his life, no one knew what happened to his parents, but the only thing that is known, is that his parents had died that same day, his dad rushing back into town, and in the night, the house was in pieces, both of his parents nowhere to be found, and no real explanation as to why as he now traveled on his own, far away from the town. He, after multiple days of walking, got into a forest, and the deeper he went, the more he lost his way, but after hours of walking he found a town through the forest, which after later discovery was a harbor town. Cosmo soon got into the town. Though as of this point when he got to the town, he lost consiousness due to his starvation and exhaustion. After some time he woke up, maybe a couple hours later, he assumed, until one of the town's healers told him almost straight up he had been sleeping for four or so days. As he could hear this he quickly got up and trembled holding his hand against his face, but he could then see some red, crimson glow on his hand, and he soon realized his eye was the thing that was glowing, and he looked scared. After a long explanation about how his body was cursed by The Crimson Demon or with the other calling, The Crimson flames. It is said that the crimson flames burn through any armor, while it may not inflict the most amount of damage from all of the different flames, it certainly was the most painful, as every time you get hit by an attack laced with the Crimson flames, it feels as though the fire burns through your entire body, like a screeching pain, striking down even the most formidable foes if used correctly. but the only problem was... no one was in control, but the flames themselves, you would be hurting anyone and everyone in sight. As Cosmo got explained that his body basically had a demon inside of his body, he decided to live in this town, though he had to train concentration here as the only thing the curse needs to take control, is for the user to fall unconsious and thus lose his own soul's control, or get so angry that they lose control. so he stayed in the town trained in the town and he could also see himself growing in the town after what felt like nothing. he had turned 18 and he had planned to leave the place and as much as they would have liked to keep Cosmo due to his well progressing studies, he said to them that he wanted to see the world.


Character Name: Cosmo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: Cosmo wears grey or black pants with a grey suit vest and white shirt with a red ribbon and crimson eyes
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

 

✦ Your character cannot start with any kind of curse or magic as these two "items" have to happen in character whilst being on Lord of the craft. That being said there is no lore about a Crimson demon, consider changing this in your biography. 

 

✦ Your skin doesn't seem appropriate with LoTC standards as we're playing in the medieval ages and as your skin is very modern, perhaps you could look through our skin archive for temporarily skins before you're able to acquire a more personal skin for your character.

 

 

 

 

Your application was good but good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Do feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Your application has unfortunately been...

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Your time has expired, you may re-apply immediately.  
Please do refer to the other post above for the following changes you need to do before your application can finally be accepted.

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