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Crabrol

By Crabrol

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: itamar#1359
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: meta gaming is playing out of character in situations your character does not know about them but the player knows
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: power gaming is playing unfairly against someone as an example decide that they are dead or you one hit ko them
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Crobroldar: hello to you to I will tell you what brings me here but wait a second

gentleman: what?

*Crobroldar starts mumbling*

Crobroldar thoughts: what do I tell him?

 dardunka: ask him to join the cult

*Crobroldar stops mumbling*

Crobroldar: DoYouWantToJoinTheChaosSide

gentleman: what are you saying young man talk slower please

Crobroldar: do you want to join the dardunka cult and the chaos side?

gentleman: No!!! why would I want more chaos in this city there is enough already I would rather to lower the chaos...

*slap*

Crobroldar: WhatTheHellDoYouMeanLowerChaosIsGreatChaosIsFriend

gentleman: why did you slap me you idiot your god isn't even real and your cult...

*punch kick punch*

Crobroldar: ahahahhahahahahahahahahhah (that's a scream)

*Crobroldar leaves*

gentleman: what's wrong with people these days

Character Name: Crobroldar
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Crobroldar is an mix of red and purple skin but he wears a black cloak. he has purple hair and purple eyes he weighs about 57 kg and is 5.3 feet tall
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Diogen

Changed Status to Denied

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied.

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!



 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Diogen#5338]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message iDiogen to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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