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By ShadowHasLeft

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Particle101#8696
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta gaming is when a person uses the internet (out of character) to find information on a subject or person. This is not allowed for it ruins part of the roleplay idea, which is to expand your knowledge as you go along on your journeys.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is unrealistic or "unfair" emote or response language that will show superiority over another player, and would ruin many good roleplay scenarios.
    Status: Denied

the first thing i remember is a cave. I look up, and my parents, cloaked in darkness, are enchanting me, trying to take me to the dark. I look down, and see blood. my blood, and i realize, i don’t remember anything. I watched my parents flee to a dark mountain, never to be seen again, and from then on swore an oath of blood to extinguish the darkness. I traveled far and wide, learning skills to fight the dark, I made friends, and lost family. I will not fail my oath. I am Aaron Brookwood, and i will  finish what i started. 

I have never found a place to call home, and have never known any relatives.I learned many skills from my companion, Elfrom, a high elf who is not like the others. We fought many battles, and on one fateful day, my only companion died at the hands of the dark. The last 4 years of my life I have been searching for a meaning to life, of which I still have not found. I will travel far, make bonds, and extinguish the dark. I will travel the empire, from city to city, and seek the darkness.

I will travel and find dwarven relics from the great collapse, for I had heard my parents chanting about them that one frightful night. They said they needed five scrolls, so that is what i seek. Next, I would seek the dead outposts and find my parents, whom I had heard lay hidden there. I would seek to either save them from their dark magics, or if it comes to it, I will kill them and their legacy of evil. I would then travel the world, seeking a home I never knew.  But all he knew, was that where he found shade magic, he would find his parents.

 

 

Character Name: Aaron Brookwood
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: height around 6' 2" .Has blue eyes and a muscular body build, is still agile and swift. Brown, medium length hair. wears cloaks and loose clothes.
Roleplay Scenario:

Aaron turns to the man, and addresses him “kind sir, I thank you for your hospitality, but I am afraid I have no time to spare. I am headed for the market to prepare for a long and dangerous journey, so good day, and do not delay me.”  

The man looks saddened by the abrupt end to the conversation but understands. This Aaron fellow looks like somebody not to be messed with.

“fare thee well then, and tarry not.” the man said, and walked away.

Aaron mumbles under his breath “waste of my time i do say...”

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LordScisso

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Unfortunately many of your answers have errors grammatically, structurally, and according to current lore, rules.  Please check into the current rules before submitting a new application. If you would like help before submitting your next one, please feel free to send me a message via discord. My discord account is included below.
  • Your Definition of Meta Gaming has several errors, as well as your Definition of Power Gaming. Please read the following link before filling out your next application.
  • Your Bio does not include any references to current lore, as is required. Please, use the wiki to find out the current lore of Arcas, and should you choose to apply again, include at least two references to current lore. Also, your backstory is questionable. You do not reference any particular lore when referring to the “Darkness” and should instead look into the dark magics currently available in the lore. While it does meet the requirement for the amount of sentences used, in role play it is often better to use the words “He/him/his” instead of “I.” Below are several links that may be able to help you when writing about dark magic for LOTC, and when writing for RolePlay. 
  •  Your Physical description is lacking, and could use some more substance. If you choose to re-apply, include more detail about his physical appearance, and form it more like a sentence using correct grammar. Also, on the skin provided it appears the eyes are blue. Please edit either the physical description or the skin itself so that they match. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are good in essence, but please form this more like a sentence using correct grammar. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario is also not grammatically correct. Please fix this upon reapplication.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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