Shadowknight2017

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason that, errors were not fixed before the 24hour mark ,though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

→ Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→you gave a roleplay definition but please include whether you have roleplayed before or not!

→Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

• • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

→Your Physical Description says he is 4ft tall, high elves can only be between 5’6 and 6’6 ft tall

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→Your Character’s biggest Fear needs to be at least 2 sentences long and contain an explanation.

→ Your likes and dislikes need to be at least two sentences long and contain an explanation!

→ Your Roleplay response must be at least 4 sentences long, with at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes and at least one action. It must also be in third person.

→Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

• https://app.grammarly.com/

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Demon_Lilly#9033, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→https://discord.com/invite/7sTjWYX