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By ShakierMirror48

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Edgarius#8470
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It's pretty much, when your in-game character acquires information through you as a real person. So if my firend Eric sent me a snap, telling me that my home is being raided, I can't tell everyone else around me that, because I first need to find it out through RP. So basically, your character getting information from yo uas a person and not from RP.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Basically, if it were a FiveM server and I was being arrested for speeding, it would be if I RPed sweating out of my handcuffs. So in-short, actions impossible in teh real world or forcing someone to do these actions, or any actions in general.
    Status: Denied

I'd respond to the man "Hello", after that would fall into thinking of what to tell this fine man. Eventually telling him, "here to look for a job and to buy some goods. Thought that maybe some richer folk might need help defending their lands". The gentleman would look at me, ip and down, the down and up. Eventually responding, "I might need a hand myself actually". Seeing me now go with him and eventually be hired a job to protect his lands.

Character Name: Hólmgeirr
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: He is a viking with big and muscly shoulders, he is avarage height for like the year 800, so about 170cm. His eyes are blue and hair is long and blond
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Josef_Rippelberg

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

- Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

- Your Physical Description states that your character is 800 years old, which is against the server Lore for humans https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks states that they believe in old norse gods which is against the server lore. I would recommend reading this. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Red_Faith 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words! 

- Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!

- Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
https://app.grammarly.com/

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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Josef_Rippelberg

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

- Your Physical Description states that your character is 800 years old, which is against the server Lore for humans https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks states that they believe in old norse gods which is against the server lore. I would recommend reading this. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Red_Faith 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words! 

- Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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