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Shawnifer16


Shawnifer16
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Chippy_Duck
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I think alot of it is common sense. make sure its realistic for something in the medieval time period is probably the biggest part. Try to avoid doing actions that are completely forces a character into something
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it ruins the story building of the scene. and can sometimes force other players characters to roleplay scenario that could be uncomfortable for them. It could also completely ruin a roleplay arc.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Zelith
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: a 5'3 highelf weighting in about 93 pounds. with dark brown hair styled as a middlepart blue eyes and the outfit would just be a basic traveler set je
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

"i- uhm ya know" He stare's at the lady wondering why me... out of all people would be expected "just.. just looking for a restart honestly.. my last home got destroyed... by the.. *a look of shock comes over his face as he stops talking and looks away* He had plans to start a new life here. Make enough money to live comfortably and mostly find new people to surround himself. Not Knowing where are the others who from from his old town. He was honestly really scared and really excited. "h-how why have you been expecting me though" He says instantly questioning on if the person might have known me..? Or what if they were the ones who caused the damage to my home.. His eyes flicker around the room to try to get a bit of a grasp/understanding of where he was. Questioning a bit on why he so blindly talked to the old woman. Was he being too trustful yet again..  



 

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Changed Status to Pending



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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please add 5 more lines of roleplay in the scenario (You can touch on plans, home life, family, hobbies and other chacrter backstories)



 

  • Please add more depth to your metagaming and power gaming answers



 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @echo_42069 to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub


 

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Changed Status to Denied



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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • Please make the above changes and repost your application



 

My discord is @echo_42069 if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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