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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: a player use real-life knowledge inside the game that determines their actions but the character doesn't know anything about the real-life world
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: forcing others to do something due to your actions. power gaming: "she decapitated him with out hesitation."
    Status: Denied

Character Name: matsune
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: dark elf / family died at young age / live on her own / doesn't have any friends / silver- white hair / wears magenta dress / has purple eyes
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Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

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- Your definition for powergaming is wrong. To correct this, please refer to: Wiki-Powergaming.

 

- Your biography is too short and lacks detail. Please reference at least one piece of server lore and expand upon your character’s details. I’d recommend using the Wiki or forums for relevant information.

 

- You cannot apply with a character knowing magic, you can however, learn magic should you find a teacher on the server.

 

- Your character description must reflect and describe the physical features of your character.

 

- The ability to ‘turn people evil with eyes’ does not exist and is a form of powergaming. Please correct this and remove the ability.

 

- You must have at least one reasonable and realistic weakness in your character’s interesting facts.

 

- Your character skin does not match the lore for Dark Elves. Dark Elves typically have dark skin, eye colour ranging from green, blue, purple, grey, or red, and hair colour ranging from white, silver, black, pale blue, pale blonde, or copper. Reference: Dark-Elves.

 

 

You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

 

For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

 

You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

 

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Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

7ahXQbs2iIw3HfIR6Q_Drbpb_-EvZ3w8pV23PeX1wLpfdnlol5vZd-0VIn8URpZm8zl3nUMjJalqXez6aiqVUjG0S0fwpBci_ye7uxGjIwgYtUmGqhLNYkXkjmtPNgf8OzXwDA-S

- Your definition for powergaming is wrong. To correct this, please refer to: Wiki-Powergaming.

 

- Your character description must reflect and describe the physical features of your character.

 

- You must have at least one reasonable and realistic weakness in your character’s interesting facts. The weakness ‘weakened by light’ isn’t realistic and is quite edgy as a trait.

 

- Your character skin still doesn’t match the lore for Dark Elves. For assistance, please refer to the Wiki: Dark-Elves. Or you can ask members of the Tailor’s Guild for assistance in the New Player Discord, and look at the skin archive in acquiring an appropriate skin: Skin Archive.  

 

 

You have 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

 

For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

 

You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

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Greetings Applicant! As of now your application is currently:

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- You still haven’t added a reasonable weakness to your character. Think outside the box. Do they suffer from a mental hinderance, a physical issue, or perhaps even a common action or quirk they’re just not good at? I’d also recommend you lose the “loves darkness” trait, it’s quite edgy and undynamic.

 

- Preferably I would like to see your biography format a little tidier. Fix any grammar mistakes and reorganise the structure so that it’s easier to read.

 

You have an additional 24 hours to correct the issues listed above.  Once you have done that, please contact me either over the forums or discord: (Gilded#1905), then I will take another look at your application.

 

For important information such as lore and definitions for metagaming and powergaming, I’d recommend using both the Wiki and forums. Please use these sources for reference when making changes to your application. I’d also recommend you join Lord of the Craft’s New Player Discord should you need any assistance from myself or other members of the Application Team.

 

You can also contact me on the server, /msg GildedDuke, or create an /atreq on the server for help from other Application Team members. If you have any further questions don’t be afraid to ask!

 


 

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This Application has since been:

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Reasons for verdict:

 

- Failure to amend your interesting facts and add at least one weakness.

 

- Biography format untidy.
 

Your 24 Hour deadline wasn’t met. However, you may reapply immediately, provided you have done so no more than 5 times this month.

 

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