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ShortPotato06

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Its a type of action being done by the character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: actions made by the roleplay
    Status: Denied

"Welcome said the Villager what are you looking for today? gold, diamonds, or a task perhaps?"  

Yuki~nanami: Adventure

Villager: Great!! here you go a task on the other side of the forest. Bring back four coal rocks and five bones of  any sort.

Yuki~nanami: alright ill take the task.

Character Name: Yuki~Nanami
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5'0ft, brownish hair and hazel eyes has strength and magical spells up of rank 200, wings , flying ability.
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Josef_Rippelberg

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

- Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

- Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!


- Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

 

- Your Physical Description must be purely physical! Don’t include any details about their personality!


- Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 


Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

- Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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