SicKicK

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules particularly involving applying with a character with magic and with connections with powerful fictional beings. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time. 

• Your Physical Description is a bit wrong. Humans are not able to have red eyes, and only heartlanders might have uncommon white hair. You may refer to this to adhere to the lore better! 

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    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Heartlanders

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord crines#2975. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Suicidium to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI