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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: SillyEve#7972
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is the action of forcing your actions to be absolute.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the act of being overpowered or too OP. This makes roleplaying unfair and a lot less fun.
    Status: Denied

Cautiously says " A little bit of all, actually." As I eye him up and down trying to figure out quickly if he is a potential friend or foe. 

Character Name: Rhalia Jewel
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Grey skin, green hair, and red eyes with a skull mask, white top, and black pants with white skull pattern.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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