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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: silverdog369#4818
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i set my caritiore with information that I would know and sometimes limatations on what the real world me could do or should do
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: metagaming can limit the other players effectiveness as a player by saying to a combat fight and I know what the enime is weak to i can easily kill him ruining the other players fun
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

(i sit down ) i am here on bisness only and need only information. now i see you have a tent so you must have information on this town. so tell me what do i need to go to find the omen. 


Character Name: Senior James
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: a average height elf with brown hair and green eyes tan skin much like a native American
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Physical Description states that your character is similar to a Native American. Please remove this, as our server is in a fantasy medieval setting, and elven cultures are not similar to real-life cultures and races. If you would like more information on elven culture, please look here:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199094-core-race-lore-elves/

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

- Please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Physical Description states that your character is similar to a Native American. Please remove this, as our server is in a fantasy medieval setting, and elven cultures are not similar to real-life cultures and races. If you would like more information on elven culture, please look here:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199094-core-race-lore-elves/

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

- Please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

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