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SimpleOgi


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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when player is using informations that he didn't learn in the game or informations that are outside of the game...For example: Using in-world knowledge from a previously played or dead character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when player is doing something that he would not be able to do in real life situation or when player is forcing actions against another player. ...For Example: In real life you would not instantly kill someone.. take their money and walk aw
    Status: Denied

I was born on Atlas in Kingdom of Norland in Ruriksgrad...

I am coming from a really reach family and my childhood was very nice, but not for long...I was spending more time with my mom and my older brother Buca because our father was spending more time with my other brother Dovla...Mom loved us so much..One night when she was making a cake she gave me a bracelet and told me to keep an eye on it...I was the youngest in our family...When i was 9 our mansion was invaded by evil thieves who killed our parents..My brothers and I were separated for a long time, nearly 10 years..I've been through a lot of things in my life...One of those things was that I was right hand of the very powerful man Otto III who was Monarch of Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska..I spend my whole life looking for my lost brothers...Now I'm 19...Three months earlier i arrived at city called Marna and then when i lost hope for my 2 lost brothers i entered a small tavern and i started drinking a lot...When i looked up I saw two people cheering...I came to them and i accidently push their table and one of them started attacking me...The other man who was stopping the first guy saw my bracelet on left hand and started to freak out that was the time when we realized that we were lost brothers...I couldn't move because of shock, but i was happy...Now, our goal is to revenge our parents...

 

 

 

P.S: Can you watch Zackattacked1996's, DovlaYo's and my application together because we have a really good story and characters biographies which are connected...


Character Name: Ogi
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: I'm white haired,with one black hair strand and i have scar on left arm...
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been DENIED because of these reason(s):

-Unfortunately guest accounts cannot make any edits to the application, so I had to deny you rather than putting you on pending. I highly suggest making a forum account before reapplying, that way you'll have 24 hours to make any changes needed.

-Your character cannot start as an important person, therefore he could not be the "Right hand of the very powerful man Otto III".

-Humans generally do not have white hair unless they are elderly. Since your character is only 19 I would suggest changing this. You can find human physical traits on the Wiki here

-Your interesting facts should contain at least one weakness your character might have. I would suggest changing your last fact to a weakness, as once again you cannot start as an important person. 

 

 

 

You may reapply in (6) hours.


 

Don’t worry friend, here is a link to the LotC New Player Help Discord! https://discord.gg/YjPZxu2



Feel free to contact me if you need further assistance you can pm me on the forums or message me on discord at: Austin#4276

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