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Willsy

By Willsy

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Broken Bones#1818
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: use information out of the character to have an advantage
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing something that is beyond the character's ability something unreal
    Status: Denied

zo is a very distant descendant of Sasha Athena, but he doesn't know that because his parents keep a secret to protect him.
He comes from a small village in Anthos.
He wasn't very sociable, so he usually played with magic.
as he grew up he made 2 friends Ben and Rose.
He was always dedicated to magic and tried to be the best at it.
One day Rose got sick and nobody knew what it was, but it was serious.
Zo tried every possible way to find a magic to cure Rose, but he failed miserably
as a result he went into depression for 2 years.
Until one day he receives a mysterious letter that said:


"The past cannot be changed but the future can always be shaped.”

                                          “Go to Haense "

 

-Your parents old firend

 

After this letter he decides to go to Haense to have a better life and find out who sent this letter
And as he was friends with his parents (who were already dying of old age)

Character Name: Zo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 43
Physical Description: he has an average body
medium hair
dark blue eyes
average height
always wears a hood
your height is 1.76
white hair
Roleplay Scenario:

...(silence)
Thank you
The city is wonderful
I came to look for a person, and have a better life condition
But because you're being so friendly you don't know me I could be a maniac.
Take care to be sociable like thatdition

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to to many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • In your Bio you mention being related to a character from anime. This is not allowed, please remove it.
  • Also in your Bio you mention growing up in Anthos. This is not allowed, as it is one of the older maps. Your character must be based in Arcas.
  • While your meta and power gaming  are correct, they could use more detail to show you know your stuff.
  • You lack a lore reference in your Bio please add one.
  • In your bio, your character can not already have magic or be working with magic. Please re-write this.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • In your Physical Traits humans can not have white hair. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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