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Sir_Potate

By Sir_Potate

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: potato undertale#1348
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming, often also referred to simply as 'Meta', is the use of information acquired out-of-character, in-character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is the carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions. This includes forcing emotes on other characters, whether inside or outside of combat, performing unrealistic physical or mental feats, such as a Halfling easily besting an Olog in single combat, ignoring the effects of a mental disability, or ignoring the effects of magic, and otherwise acting godly, such as being invincible and possessing unfair and lore-breaking powers
    Status: Denied

From the day I was born, the life that I own and the life I wanted would always come with a price over my head. If I wasn't saved by my father - yours truly would have been executed by the age of 8. I really don't know where I was born, but all I know is that when I was 5, my family moved to the kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska, where I became a man. honestly, my father was my hero, he pulled together, basically fight, scratched, and clawed his way just to feed me and my mother. I wanted to do the best thing I can do to help my parents, so what I did was I sold my eyes to the dwarfs in the exchange for enough money to last a lifetime. but now I am just a wandering warrior, walking all around the continent, waiting to repay my parents from my eternal debt.

Character Name: Holtern Luktar
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: 6ft, white eyes, with black patted armor, 197lb, blond hair medium hair and a beard.
Roleplay Scenario:

"hello there, sorry that I can't see your face and clothes but I would like to know where do I go to get a job at the castle.

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Skin has some sort of blindfold on, I don't know if I have missed anything but I do not see anything about it in any of the Backstory or Physical description.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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