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    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: power gaming) is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly video games, boardgames, and role-playing games, with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as storytelli
    Status: Denied

My name is Slab and im an Olog. I was abandoned when i was little, and i was living in the wild for a long time.I started to train and learn about the world. Then it started the woods set on fire and i had to run leaving everything in my home. i ran and ran until i found a human camp, they were scared of me and ran away, so i decided to stay hiden from the world.

Character Name: Slab
Character Race: OLOG
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Slab the Olog
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thanks for making an application but unfortunately your application has been...

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Your application seems to contain a lot of plagiarism which is highly unacceptable, you may re-apply immediately as soon as you've done the following changes. 

 

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✦ Your metagame and powergaming definition seem to have been plagarism from another source which is highly unacceptable and therefor being an instant denial of your application. Please do check the definition and see if you can change them. You can also contact me if you still need help being explained what it is. Consider adding an example that complements the definitions.

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

 

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features lik e color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

 

 

✦ At least one weakness should be mentioned under your interesting facts, though I'd recommend that you expand your interesting facts to full sentences.

 

✦ It wouldn't be very realistic that an Olog would be able to do the job of a blacksmith as it requires a certain amount of skill to be somewhat proficient at it. Which an Olog would have a very hard time doing. Consider changing that or remove it entirely from your interesting facts. 

 

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I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions

 

 

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