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Declanswift

By Declanswift

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: So im not the best reader but I think it means like using info you get out of game in game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing actitions that are unfrair or over powered.
    Status: Denied

Grew up in a poor house hold in the holy orodian empire. His mom loved him very much but she was always working so it was hard to get attached to her. His dad died in a hunting accident when he was only 6. He had dyslexia so he struggled in school. When he was 8 he got taught how to use a bow and was very good at it. When he was 13 a tragity struck, while out at the market his mom died of a hard- attack he had nothing so he joined the army and faught in the war of two emporers as a archer. After he started to steal form the wealthy in order to survive

Character Name: Declan Swift
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Strong like 5*9 brown eyed a bit skinny black hair
Roleplay Scenario:

Declan says ïm here for some adventure and to meet new people!" the man says the best way to meet some poeple is at that pub. " Thanks mate" Declan says with a grin and he starts walking there. 

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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography states that he fought in the War of the Two Emperors. This is impossible considering his age and when the War of the Two Emperors occurred. You can read more about the Holy Orenian Empire here.

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!



After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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