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JulesDesar

By JulesDesar

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it is the fact of changing your character knolege in game wiyh what you know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its kind of spamming
    Status: Denied

Born in the principality of Ando Alur by two elven parents named Klinel and Tempesia, they moved out of the principality to live in the country side. At the age of 11, his home was raided by a group of orcs, who killed his parents, stole all of his goods and let him live after beating him. This event made him fear orcs but gave him the desire to become a great warrior and eliminate all orcs thet he encounter. After this traumitising moment, he started to wander in the realm and gain knoledge and skills.

Character Name: Gaelin
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 72
Physical Description: tall, blue eyes, short black hair
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

 

Hi and thank you, my good sir. Nothing brings me here other than the wind in my wings.

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Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reasons listed below. Please read through them, and make the appropriate changes before applying again.

 

 

Definitions: Your definitions are both incorrect, too limited in detail. Please go more in-depth with them. If unsure, search up online for some examples and definitions, but make sure to re-write them with your own words. 

 

 

Backstory: Backstory looks alright, but please stray away from generic tropes - so many people have applied to the server with their characters being slain by Orcs. Please choose something less generic, and throw some creativity into it. It's good that you did try to go more in-depth as to how the traumatic experience affected your character though, and I hope you do the same for your next attempt.

 

Physical Description: Needs some work - elaborate more on what your character looks like, along with any significant details that makes him unique from anyone else. The more detail, the better for this section.

 

Personality Traits/Quirks: Needs alot of work as well. Detail what behavioural patterns, or gimmicks your character may do that makes them unique. Make sure to throw in some flaws as well, as no character is meant to be perfect.

 

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs serious work as well. Treat it like a normal roleplay interaction, and keep it simple if you find it difficult. It's just a way for us to determine your roleplay quality, and make sure it meets our server's standards. In your next roleplay scenario, please include the following:

 

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

 

 

Feel free to re-apply at any time after this denial, just make sure you make the changes with the aforementioned things. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2021.

 

Best of luck, I hope to see you on the server soon.

 

 

 

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