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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when you use something out of character for something in character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: doing something unrealistic for your character
    Status: Denied

his mother died at birth and his father died in a battle before my birth. raised by my aunt but then she was killed by disease when i was 10. with my aunt as my only family i was a orphan on the street. no one to trust. then someone took me in and gave me a job to get me on my feet and here i am a 23 year old dwarf who has a job in the community


Character Name: ragram
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: short and stout at around 200 lbs. red beard
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been:

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Unfortunately, since you are a guest account, you cannot edit your application. I'd recommend making a forum account so you can edit your application if you need to make any changes! Here's what you'll need to fix up for next time you apply: 

 

-Your definitions aren't entirely correct. Please update them, and provide an example of both powergaming and metagaming.

-You need to make reference to the LOTC lore in your biography. This can be done by mentioning a place, or event that has impacted your character. If you can find another way to reference the lore, though, feel free! You can check out our lore on the wiki, which can be found here.

-I'd recommend adding a bit more depth to your biography. As it stands, it is currently very bland and quite cliche.

-Your interesting facts section are just character traits. Please make them a little more interesting.

 

You may reapply in six hours.

If you need any additional assistance, I'd recommend joining the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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